Wednesday, 8 March 2017

Advertisment Feedback from peers

Radio Advert


1.      What are the good things about this advert?

Lewis: The sound effects makes it feel like am on an airplane and it makes it sound realistic

Kate: Good sound effects as they make it sound very realistic. Makes you listen as it makes it more intriguing.

Melissa: Sounds just like they’re on an aeroplane, the script and sounds are very realistic.

Becca: I really like your sound effects, different speakers and the script because it sounds realistic

Eleanor: This sounds very realistic, therefore seeming a lot more intriguing and is also very relatable.

2.      What Codes and Conventions do you think it has followed?

Lewis: From hearing you followed using a slogan, sound effects, voice over with an northern voice the only one I didn’t think you followed was the jingle 

Kate: northern accent, conversation style script, terms and conditions and rhetorical questions.

Melissa: There is a strong Northern accent used and it has been edited together well.

Becca: Persuasion, it is between 15 – 60 seconds long, repetition and also a slogan.

Eleanor:  A LOT of persuasion, rhetorical questions and repetition.

3.      What improvements would you make?

Lewis: Improvement could be making it straight to the point having the woman talking and the rest of the people talking wasn’t needed

Kate: nothing – it is very good as it is

Melissa: Nothing.

Becca: Maybe add some more contact information.

Eleanor: Add background music maybe

4.      What target audience would you class this advert as?

Lewis: I think it’s aimed at a family audience at working class

Kate: adults as they would be the ones who will be booking flights and holidays.

Melissa: More for adults who decide where they go on holiday.

Becca: Adults

Eleanor: Adults.

5.      Do you want to say anything else?

Lewis: I like the overall style of the advert and that would want me to fly with you

Kate: I liked the effects on the voice on the speaker and how it seems like someone is moving closer to serve the refreshments.

Melissa: Creatively put together, feels like you’re actually there.

Becca: it sounds like you’re actually there which is amazing and could potentially convince people to choose this airline over another.

Eleanor: It’s very realistic which makes the ad a lot more intriguing and makes me want to fly with this airline rather than any other.

Print Advert


1.       What are the good things about this advert?

Lewis: Its very well layout, bright colours and good use of white space

Melissa: The printed ad looks realistic.

Kate: Eye-catching colours and the use of a ticket shape

Becca: Fitting colours and I like how you have used geography

Eleanor: The colours are bright and bold.

2.       What Codes and Conventions has it followed?

Lewis: Followed using a colour scheme (yellow), information, slogan, image and logo

Melissa: The printed ad shows most of the information about your company and consists of colours associated with nature

Kate: logo use, contact info, slogan and offers.

Becca: contact info, slogan and persuasive language

Eleanor: Contact info, slogan, offers.

3.       What improvements would you make?

Lewis: Too much going off in the advert, there is lots of stuff to read and understand and its confusing

Kate: I wouldn’t

Melissa: None

Becca: None :)

Eleanor: None

4.       What theories does this advert follow?

Lewis: I think you used the ADIA because it got my attention and I wanted to know more and from knowing it made me want to fly with you because of the offers you have.

Kate: logos & AIDA

Melissa: AIDA

Becca: AIDA & LOGOS

Eleanor: AIDA

5.       Any other comments?

Lewis: Overall a well layout poster with a bit too much information and images

Melissa: Very Persuasive with the deals.

Becca: Really like it

Eleanor: love it

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